Monday, October 23, 2017

I Am A Lamp Oil Lit Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am a lamp oil lit
Small, cute and made off mud
And my flame in open
Spreading a bit of warmth
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Bashyam Narayanan
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Jazib Kamalvi 02 November 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Bashyam. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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