I Am A Human Being Comments

Whoa.. I love it. Like they say, poetry does come from the depths of the heart. And this one speaks volumes. I mean...who really knows you? ? Do you even truly know yourself? ? I am a human being..not a super being.

Pureness of heart mind and spirit ringing out loud and clear. I think you could enhance the poem further, Jesse, by finding alternatives to 'I am'. On a separate note, thank you for your lovely words on 'The Parting'. Pleased to meet you. Warm regards, Gina.

Darkness will swirl around me poetry starts from roots of heart