I am a girl
with all feminine worries
complaints and objection to all
just for nothing
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A nice poetic imagination, Sajna. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
i hope and pray, that your wishes for the future may be fulfilled in wholesome terms....... your femininity is expressed very well in your poem.... be devoted to God, pray well. be artistic. control the emotions and be a strong woman, a wife and a beloved mother later....... God bless you always.
An extraordinary attempt on an excellent thought and expressed in an exquisite way, thanks.
Sajna you are a beautiful and smart girl. You know what is expected of you, so do your best to be God's wonderful child. Love your parents because they just want you to be well and love your body guard brother. He is wonderful too.
good lines and rhythm, Sajna....and a good original mind close to nature and its beauties: praise the nature's scenic beauty makes some fun with birds! always keep my mind artistic
I like this poem, , , , , , Being a girl we are the worry of our parents/\/\/\/Good poem, , , sajna........10****** Rose
a reality of a grown up girl in a middle class conservtive family, poetically painted beautifully. my daughter may too feel in the same way. keep it up
this one is very good poem..i really enjoyed it....keep it up
Beautiful feelings and emotions of an Indian girl is just smiling here. Excellent feelings for life, home, and society at large.
I enjoyed reading this poem. you have captured the minds of many in a few words...thx for the share......smiles n blessings
beautiful poem, I have two daughters and they do make me worry for their future and for today. I think you would like my poem “Daughter” you’re a good writer, keep it up!
This is an excellent poem. I think yourfather doesn't need to worry. It is such pleasure to read this poem and it shows the true nature of someone who dares to stand up for great values. Very well done, girl.
wow! ! ! almost all grls r like this.u brought it down 2 words.. grt one. i'm a malayali too...
DONT WORRY BE HAPPY AND DONT LET ANY ONE TO BE WORRIED. THIS POEM EXPRESSES YOUR OWN PAIN AND REALISATION. INDEED, I APPRECIATE BUT DONT BOTHER FOR ANY MATTER. GOD IS THERE
I KNOW YOU ARE A GIRL. NICE POEM. WISH YOU A HAPPY NEW YEAR. MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND YOUR FAMILY A JOYFUL YEAR FULL OF PROSPERITY
interesting