Saturday, December 31, 2011

I Am A Girl! Comments

Rating: 4.6

I am a girl
with all feminine worries
complaints and objection to all
just for nothing
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Sajna Kailas
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dasola 03 October 2018

interesting

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Sajna. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dev Anand 30 July 2016

i hope and pray, that your wishes for the future may be fulfilled in wholesome terms....... your femininity is expressed very well in your poem.... be devoted to God, pray well. be artistic. control the emotions and be a strong woman, a wife and a beloved mother later....... God bless you always.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 March 2016

With all feminine worries in life! ! Nice piece of work.

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Wahab Abdul 01 March 2012

An extraordinary attempt on an excellent thought and expressed in an exquisite way, thanks.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 11 February 2012

Sajna you are a beautiful and smart girl. You know what is expected of you, so do your best to be God's wonderful child. Love your parents because they just want you to be well and love your body guard brother. He is wonderful too.

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Raj Arumugam 10 January 2012

good lines and rhythm, Sajna....and a good original mind close to nature and its beauties: praise the nature's scenic beauty makes some fun with birds! always keep my mind artistic

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Dead Rose 10 January 2012

I like this poem, , , , , , Being a girl we are the worry of our parents/\/\/\/Good poem, , , sajna........10****** Rose

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 10 January 2012

a reality of a grown up girl in a middle class conservtive family, poetically painted beautifully. my daughter may too feel in the same way. keep it up

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Salema Khatun 07 January 2012

this one is very good poem..i really enjoyed it....keep it up

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Rekha Mandagere 05 January 2012

Beautiful feelings and emotions of an Indian girl is just smiling here. Excellent feelings for life, home, and society at large.

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(De Va) 05 January 2012

I enjoyed reading this poem. you have captured the minds of many in a few words...thx for the share......smiles n blessings

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Federico del Corazón 05 January 2012

beautiful poem, I have two daughters and they do make me worry for their future and for today. I think you would like my poem “Daughter” you’re a good writer, keep it up!

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Hans Vr 03 January 2012

This is an excellent poem. I think yourfather doesn't need to worry. It is such pleasure to read this poem and it shows the true nature of someone who dares to stand up for great values. Very well done, girl.

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Neetha Sasidharan 02 January 2012

wow! ! ! almost all grls r like this.u brought it down 2 words.. grt one. i'm a malayali too...

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 01 January 2012

Phenomenal poem, from a true heart....wow!

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Ramesh Rai 31 December 2011

DONT WORRY BE HAPPY AND DONT LET ANY ONE TO BE WORRIED. THIS POEM EXPRESSES YOUR OWN PAIN AND REALISATION. INDEED, I APPRECIATE BUT DONT BOTHER FOR ANY MATTER. GOD IS THERE

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Ramesh Rai 31 December 2011

I KNOW YOU ARE A GIRL. NICE POEM. WISH YOU A HAPPY NEW YEAR. MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND YOUR FAMILY A JOYFUL YEAR FULL OF PROSPERITY

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Rigzin Namgyal 31 December 2011

..great poem...amazingly written..keep it up..

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Dave Walker 31 December 2011

Like it a great write. Great poem.

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