Monday, July 7, 2014

I Am A Diamond In The Rough Comments

Rating: 4.2

I am a diamond in the rough,
meant to be buried yet still remain tough,
My father told me i could outshine them all;
for, at my worst I still stood tall.
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Kelley Collins
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Jemimah Dove Diamond 30 October 2020

This is beautifully written

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Norah Tunney 05 July 2017

What a beautiful tribute Kelley It touched my heart. Dusty is never more than a breath away

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Bharati Nayak 05 July 2017

I am a diamond in the rough, meant to be buried yet still remain tough, My father told me i could outshine them all; for, at my worst I still stood tall. Many times dirt has covered me, I still shine bright; as, this is what is meant to be, I am a diamond in the rough, accidentally buried; yet, still remain tough. - - - - - - - - - - - - - -A nice tribute to your brother who is no more.It reflects how you value him.

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Seamus O Brian 05 July 2017

There is nothing so precious as family. To lose your brother tears away the very fabric of life. You have done for him what only you can do, and I hope that it will always bless your memory of him.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 July 2017

I have been buried enough! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tom Allport 05 July 2017

a wonderful tribute poem that will always shine a light for your brother much loved? ................dazzling written.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2017

This is nice to see your poem here as the poem of the day. Congratulations! On your brother Dusty's birthday you have written a nice tribute poem. A soul is like diamond dazzles in sky of emotion and duty. Yes, he is the star he shines bright. This is a lovely poem definitely...10

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Kayode Are 05 July 2017

An admirable chi made glorious by the shine of the diamond in the mud of life, though buried.

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Lantz Pierre 05 July 2017

One of the most difficult challenges possible is to take a dull, dirty, time-worn cliche and turn it into an object of wonder and beauty, containing an elusive fire within itself which can be approached but never touched. To make it multi-faceted and dancing with a light that comes from within. In fact, it may be impossible.

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Christina Simmons 05 July 2017

Such positive words. Very uplifting for the reader. This poem reminds me of a poem I wrote when I first started writing poetry. Sadly I lost it and can't remember all the words. Well done! Congratulation! ! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 July 2017

When the going gets rough the tough gets going.... congrats on being chosen... Rated 10+++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST, BATHE YOUR HEART, and TAKE TIME TO THINK... Thanks, Kelley👍

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Susan Williams 05 July 2016

Congratulations! Your brother would be proud to be honored by this

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Ludolf Dauphin 05 July 2016

Words of inspiration, really a very beautiful poem.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 05 July 2016

Yes I am a diamond tough and rough and my friendship defines wonderful relationship. This is very interesting and amazing poem shared here really. Nice sharing.10

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Tom Billsborough 05 July 2016

A sad but noble poem about a very special brother. I think a Diamond in the rough is something special and, as a person, a very special friend. it is a very loving tribute. He would have loved it. well done on a well deserved poem of the day. Also thinking of my American friends on the 4th July. A special poem and a special day. Tom Billsborough

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 July 2016

A beautifully conceived marvelous tribute and an amazing poem. Heartiest Congrats for it's rightful recognition as the member poem of the Day.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 July 2016

Beautiful poem full of inspiration. One can shine like a diamond in life if one has the guts to withstand the rough times life compels one to face. Move on.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 05 July 2016

It may be valued just for its profound deep meaning. Poem is a diamond befallen in readers hands. Wonderfully done. Congrats for being the POD. Thanks for sharing. X

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Igho Odiete 05 July 2016

This is just beautiful...... Very thorough Congrats

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Savita Tyagi 05 July 2016

Very nice poem to inspire and encourage and a lovely tribute.

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