I Am A Deserted Comments

This is fantastic. Against all odds, you have managed to keep the young ones insulated. Their happiness gives you the reason to be happy and forget the past which was full of pain and anguish. Thanks for this poem which ends on an optimistic note.

I take the stress of making my kins happy and jolly. But, alone I cry concealing my pain and show them that I am very happy. A good poem of aching soul which forbears pain to please others.A poem of pain and pleasure.it took my heart. Col Muhammad Khalid khan

The night is deep and I am running my fingers over words of expression. Nice observation and suitable poem.

I take the stress of making my kins happy and jolly. But, alone I cry concealing my pain and show them that I am very happy. so nice poem

Let me play with your poem Sister Neela: I am a dessert from which many come to have and never-ending supply of love and goodness LOVE, the real deal, served on a plate of kindness with the fork of benevolence sprinkled with joy Come one and all to the love kitchen of Sister Neela! The love you share is god's love, gobble up lots yourself pure soul you ARE LOVE