Monday, February 14, 2011

I Am A Chocolate Cherry On Your Lips Comments

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The taste of life is bitter or is sweet,
But me i am a chocolate flavor,
When sitting on your lips.
You could try many flavors,
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Cristina Teodor
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Elena Sandu 09 June 2012

Oh dear this image is so strong! Is there a man who could resist to such a call? Even those with the heart on busy could have the sin of their mouth become watery. Hard to resist for me too, a woman attracted only by one man. I adore the cherry filled chocolate.Thanks, I shall try to find some one of these days. Lovely poem, thank you for share.

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Ahmed Abomahfouz 01 May 2011

i adore chocolate, but yours seem to have a special taste as your special taste inpoetry

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Terence George Craddock 10 March 2011

I will be a chocolate cherry on your lips, A sensual poem of love for the beloved, what could be more appropriate for Valentine's night and all my favourite flavours, paradise for a choc-oh-holic :)

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Dave Dafes 06 March 2011

The imagery and the sensation this poem provokes is awesome... I love the melt in your arms part..Well written

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