Monday, June 20, 2011

I Am A Certain Poetes Comments

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I am a certain poetess
Strewing about the rhymes.
My heart blazes on and on,
Its fire burns at all times.
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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David Beckham 20 June 2011

wow! very lyrical and certainly very fluid in structure. I love the second stanza and the beggining of the 3rd with, 'I have no name' defintely puts a stamp on this and to me its just that one verse that truly makes it stand out! Theres is almost something very medieval about it and something war like about it. 'My heart blazes on and on'... Like a true warrior that you are. Well penned. tfs 10/10

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