I Am A Cat Comments

Akhtar Jawad is a great poet that we all love to read to him, and it's nice to see you and your poems here too. keep up.

I missed your message. Now accidentally I spotted it! You have a great poet as your grandfather.... you seem to have inherited his talent. Keep penning! Your grandpa Akhtar Jawad, I am sure will continue to direct you! All the Best.... smart one! Your poem on the cat is beautiful!

A very well written poem. Keep it up along your studies. I hope this Grandson will gonna light up his grandpa's name.

Young mind is shining with effective creativity to express the theme of natural chain. A cat can see in the dark as cat has very sharp vision and realizes love well. This is a very fantastic and expressive poem on animal theme. I wish you all the best to write more and more new poems when you are getting free time out of your studies. I wish you too to have a bright future and perform excellent in studies. Again I am rating 10 for you.

Your grandfather is a great poet, but he is wise and correct, studies are first priority. Then reward yourself with poetry. Thank you, Umar

Congratulations, my dear Umar. You have done a splendid job, young man. This poem of yours has all the necessary ingredients required to make it count in the big league. You will make your grandpa and the readers proud. Thanks.

Creativity has no age and you should write in your leisure time as advised by your Grandfather nevertheless this is a fantastic poem......................Masha Allah, May Allah increase your writing power and make u an effective writer Aamin...10++

First thing first, better you concentrate on your studies. However, when you have no work, you may write poems, I don't discourage you. The poem is nice.

It is a good first poem to try Umar keep writing and then your hand will keep crafting greater keep it up :)