I Am A Beetle, A Small Beetle Comments

Nice writing. Very Imaginative. I wish that I was smart enough to read it in the original language.

sweet poem....................

It's a lovely and long poem. Loved the way story goes and rhyming is fabulous.

This is pure fun! A delight. You should mention that the translation is at the bottom. It's long enough that I almost missed reading this desert like confection.