I Am A Beach Comments

Successful personification of the beach with all its attractions. I love beaches like the one in your photo. My standout line: 'giving the surfers sea rides'. That's what I used to do.

A fascinating landscape of a lovely beach with such precision that the scene instantly comes to life. Full marks for this remarkable poem.

Lovely write. Keep writing and your words will turn into jewels!

I love the concept and the stunning imagery of this very beautiful poem. I love the ocean too, it is nature's icon, a legend of moods and tranquility giving inspiration to mankind! You are a very talented poet!

Hi Chandni, This is the first time I have a read a poem by you. Enjoyed reading, thoroughly. I live in Kerala, with a beach wherever you turn to. And I lived in Chennai (Madras) for long- there are two very long and beautiful beaches there. And of course, I lived in Mumbai for some time and was regular at Juhu.. I love beaches. But, have never tried to explore her heart and mind, the way you have done. I am a beach Love life the utmost I teach Great thinking- yes, that is what a beach teaches you- love your life, love your earth by loving your life. Fantastic idea expressed in exquisitely beautiful imagery drawn in from the nature. And beautifully, poetically and rhymingly worded. Nice work. Continue writing and sharing. Thank you.

Very well written, on the beach every she'll is a poem.

Gorgeous young people keeping me bustled, The lofty coconut trees, The cool breeze, I am a beach, personification of a beach. At your young age you write already. wonderful. keep up and become a great writer. thank you. God bless