Saturday, June 29, 2024

I Am Comments

Rating: 5.0

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I'm a mountain rising mysterious on the distant horizon
I'm a valley mist rising mystic above the quiet river
I'm a waterfall falling in tumbles deep and tumultuous
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Susan Williams
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Timber Koleden 22 June 2025

Such a wonderfully expressive poem! It contains lovely imagery! Thank you for blessing us with this poem! I hope you continue writing poetry shortly!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 June 2025

A poetic gem to be treasured always. Each and every line stands out. Poetry at its best!

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Aarzoo Mehek 18 June 2025

You are everything and all like this poem.

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M.J. Lemon 05 June 2025

Amazing verse, Susan. This poem travels from the universe...to all that really matters in the universe. A perfect 10!

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Bri Edwards 13 November 2024

REALLY though, Susan, who are you, ......REALLY? ? ? ? Are you the handmaiden groveling at my feet? The ever present scent of fragrant summer flowers? The rider standing in the stirrups so tall? ? Hmm? REALLY! bri : )

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Bri Edwards 07 October 2024

Aw, gee, Susan: 'I'm the fingers of cool night breezes playing in your hair' How did you know what I was just thinking? ? ***** and to Favorites. Thanks for resubmitting. bri : )

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Bharati Nayak 06 October 2024

A brilliant write, like that of Susan Williams! How did I miss it till now?

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Smoky Hoss 21 September 2024

Wow. Beautiful, brilliant, amazing poem. I absolutely love this one. Your words sit upon my heart like a most precious and wonderful dream. Superb, sublime.

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Deepak S S 09 August 2024

A wonderful poem.

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M. Asim Nehal 21 July 2024

Vastness of your poem embraces everything around, artfully written poem. Long time not seen your poem, happy you are back.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 July 2024

Brilliantly done my friend Bravo and Thank you for aharing

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Rebecca Navarre 04 July 2024

Dear Susan, I hope you're doing okay! .. And I hope you stay writing here you've been missed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 04 July 2024

Ever such heart and emotion that flows through this poem so very beautifully composed! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 04 July 2024

An ever so deeply moving poem! .. So Beautifully expressed! ..

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