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I'm a mountain rising mysterious on the distant horizon
I'm a valley mist rising mystic above the quiet river
I'm a waterfall falling in tumbles deep and tumultuous
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A poetic gem to be treasured always. Each and every line stands out. Poetry at its best!
Amazing verse, Susan. This poem travels from the universe...to all that really matters in the universe. A perfect 10!
REALLY though, Susan, who are you, ......REALLY? ? ? ? Are you the handmaiden groveling at my feet? The ever present scent of fragrant summer flowers? The rider standing in the stirrups so tall? ? Hmm? REALLY! bri : )
Aw, gee, Susan: 'I'm the fingers of cool night breezes playing in your hair' How did you know what I was just thinking? ? ***** and to Favorites. Thanks for resubmitting. bri : )
A brilliant write, like that of Susan Williams! How did I miss it till now?
Wow. Beautiful, brilliant, amazing poem. I absolutely love this one. Your words sit upon my heart like a most precious and wonderful dream. Superb, sublime.
Vastness of your poem embraces everything around, artfully written poem. Long time not seen your poem, happy you are back.
Dear Susan, I hope you're doing okay! .. And I hope you stay writing here you've been missed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++
Ever such heart and emotion that flows through this poem so very beautifully composed! ..
An ever so deeply moving poem! .. So Beautifully expressed! ..
Such a wonderfully expressive poem! It contains lovely imagery! Thank you for blessing us with this poem! I hope you continue writing poetry shortly!