Wednesday, October 30, 2019

I Am Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a redbird in a tree hole
knitting and weaving my nest
eyes alert for other knitters
sitting to make sure
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Jenny Kalahar
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Anil Kumar Panda 30 October 2019

A very nice poem on various animals and winter. Enjoyed the style you have put your thoughts in to a poem. Thanks for sharing. 'I am a stray cat in barn straw claiming my place for winter molding it to my curves teaching these stalks my outline coating them with fur'.. is a nice stanza. Loved it.

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Jenny Kalahar 30 October 2019

Thank you, Anil! I was walking in the afternoon, noticing animals preparing for winter. I wanted to try to capture what I was seeing. - Jenny

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