I Am Comments

A pensive poignant write. Something amiss!

favorite lines: I am the badge of anxiety that I wear on my chest. It's what I let everyone identify me by. The girl who let's everything get to her and holds it back to the point she's crying in class during a presentation. several of your 'sentences' may not be considered 'complete sentences' by my ex-teachers. but i would probably write them the same way. anyway, WE GET poetic license to cover our butts. to MyPoemList. bri ;)

I am but a horse on a carousel going through life in up and down motions that's on the same path that goes around and around and around. ..................i'd put a comma after I am but a horse. AND AFTER motions. OR i'd put a comma just after motions, but delete that's. i'm assuming the horse is on the same path, not the carousel. thanks for sharing. (to be continued) ...

The girl who let's everything.............let's would mean let us..........to me! ha ha. try lets. :) Living life in an up and down motions.....you left out the an when you typed the last two lines; i like it withOUT the an. :) i DO like the poem. :) (to be continued) .....