Saturday, January 23, 2016

I Am Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am a book getting judged by its cover every day, waiting to be noticed and treated with more respect
I wonder why people bully others because of what happens to them with their own lives
I hear the wind talking in monotones
I see invisible people turning neon green
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Jazib Kamalvi 17 April 2018

Write comment. Great start, Vanessa. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 April 2018

I am a book getting judged by its cover every day, waiting to be noticed and treated with more respect - a fact, a truth, physical attraction, infatuation, , .. thank u for this poem. tony

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Vanessa Nicklas 16 April 2018

yea no problem and thank you!

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Nishi Kumari 26 January 2016

True people don't really see the good person inside us but the person whom we appear by our outlook..nice share...n a good start....

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Nicklas Leow 24 January 2016

Pretty much sum up what everyone feels in one part of their life. Thank you! Keep writing! :)

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Lyn Paul 23 January 2016

Yes, Keep on writing for sure. Be proud of who you are! Good things will come. Enjoyed reading Vanessa.. Thank You

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Vanessa Nicklas 26 January 2016

thank you and no problem: -)

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Weldon Davis 23 January 2016

It starts with you Vanessa :) Very good poem that shows emotion and promise...Keep writing! !

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Vanessa Nicklas 26 January 2016

thank you so much

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Vanessa Nicklas

Vanessa Nicklas

Rawlins, Wyoming
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