Sunday, October 20, 2013

I Am Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am the smoke
That drifts out from between your lips
After a nice, long drag
From a cigarette.
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Danielle Kieschnick
COMMENTS
Leah Ayliffe 13 February 2014

Wow! This poem is just magnetic. Lovely, just lovely.

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Khairul Ahsan 14 November 2013

Beautiful! You've given an 'insider's' views.

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Calvin Curdle 23 October 2013

U succeeded in creating a strong picture. I salute!

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