I wake from sound-sleep
Nobody notices me, even a green leaf!
'Good Morning, the glorious sun
Bless my day with full of funs
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May be you r an ant but the thoughts, they all touch heaven! Wonderful! Awesome!
Superb, outstanding, fantastic, mindblowing....it is really many adjectives being failure to measure the beauty and style you write in
Really interesting poem! When I start to read your poem, I can't see who u are.But in the end, I get it u are just an ant.Well done! ! ! !
you have a lot of humor - and got a nice ink - please tell us some more - for example how an ant thinks - or what language they speak - and how it sounds - hope for more nice stories - you did well and profound: =)
instead practised more to be brave that really good and motivating
nice work. what a beautiful ending.it made me surprised.i love the forth part when the ant wouldnt pray and run away mucha gracias for sharing cheers
Good, good and good! ! ! really well done! really well done.! You have made a green nature in my mind by your work. an accede to the energy again well done
the end was superb..an unexpected ending superb.....great work: -) »so close«
Full of wonderful imagination! I really like your simple and clean writting style.