I Am........ Comments

Good thoughts and wonderful metaphors, images and similes, a nice write of hope and aspiration. Read mine – If Only – Adeline

Shockingly elegant in such simple form! So reminiscent of some of my favorite poets: Plath, Sexton, and even Mary Frye. Valerie, you are amazingly talented...

An amazing poem describing the Almity who is present in everything. a great poem in deed.

Wow! Amazing and vey impressive poem Valerie. Thank you for this great piece of art. Siya_! !

OH! VAL! This is so amazing and fantastic~ I love this poem and the deepness it entails, yet, simply put! ! ! Bravo for this piece! ! and thank you again for sharing it with us all! ! !

Valerie, I am speechless, your soul in such beauty writes so we can read. More then beautiful this poem is! thank you!

Wonderful poem, Val, far better than my little one :) Ruth, taking her hat off to you.....

wow, this beautiful poem has no peers, I love it.

splendid metaphors in this love poem-thank you for sharing..

Absolutely splendiferous.... I adore the flow and ease I slipped mentally through this in a dream like state...fabulous tyvm Karen...and thanks for reviewing three feathers

Wonderfully written, full of meaning. Soul is everything

It's a great poem, Val. It's beautiful, witty and consummating. Simply put, it is all of Life captured in twenty-three lines.

lovely poem Valerie it captures what makes us alive our essence our lives our souls. lovely poem

Some poets prefer to be themselves. But you are her soul and not yourself. Wonderful! The anaphoric repetition of 'I am the..' does not bore. The rhyming couplets dazzle us with beautiful meaning in them. Well Done.

Yes, this is the ultimate giving as true love: forgetting self. Soul filling poem, thank you!

A massive poem! Every line is a great quotation! Unforgettable poem! ! Unforgettable poet! Thank you

I am your soul........ I am not me. beautiful

Powerful write. Especially the part at the end. Reminds me of the poem dont weep at my grave

immensely beautiful! divine

There is an almost ethereal quality here although the voice would be within the mind or the minds' eye seeing and knowing and spiritually growing, a delightful and meditative poem, especially with the delicate use of repetition.