Monday, March 26, 2012

I Am Comments

Rating: 4.8

Down, Down, Down
Where I am, Where I will be
Who I am, and Who I Will be
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Lucy Lae
COMMENTS
Mark Dillon 21 August 2012

yes, you are, and your words elevate you into the lighte of the sun.

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Neko Girl 30 March 2012

wow you are such a talented writer and your poem is amazing and you are amazing keep on writing and i will keep on reading :) , love, Tin Mouse

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Ramesh Rai 30 March 2012

nature always changes and nothing is permanent. some time up some time down. a beautiful poem.

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Neil Crawford 26 March 2012

There is always hope. I like the positive statement of the last two words - powerful stuff. Thanks for the comment on my silly little piece 'Word Association Exercise' - It's not meant to be taken seriously. It's very much 'tongue in cheek'. As Valerie says - the sun is always shining - even when we cannot see it, it IS shining.

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Valerie Dohren 26 March 2012

No matter how far down one might be, the sun is always up there shining, one just has to look up to see it. A beautiful poem expressing how we all feel from time to time.

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