Sunday, December 18, 2011

I Am Comments

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I am a cat with no claws, a dog with no bark, a tree with no leaves.
I am a rainbow with no color, a song with no music, a fire with no heat.

I am the sun with no rays, a cloud with no rain, the wind with no breeze.
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Sandra J. 29 July 2012

Your poetry is unique, relateable yet distant....it work well though :)

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Sandra J. 02 January 2012

Keith this poem is beautiful although it is sad, sometimes we do not see the purpose within the mystery of life, but there is always something more- never give up.

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Keith Foley

Keith Foley

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