Monday, June 14, 2010

I Am Comments

Rating: 5.0

***Note: This poem was originally written for an English assignment, according to a very concise, pre-arranged template. Personally, I highly dislike the limitations and distinct lack of creativity in this poem, but decided to post it anyway to the suggestion from several friends. Make what you want of it; poetry, like all other forms of art, is subjective, and everyone's opinion of the same piece is always slightly different.

I am a perfectionist, a dreamer, diligence gone awry
I wonder what it feels like to soar in the sky
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Leslie Ching
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Raymond Harris 14 June 2010

Nice im lost of words good work...

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Emily Spears 14 June 2010

I really like this poem. It's so much like me in so many ways. It's beautiful! Thanks for sharing. :)

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Leslie Ching

Leslie Ching

Toronto, ON, Canada
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