I Am Comments

' I am the remainder - I AM' That was cool - got me thinking now what to congure up?

I like your poem. It has a potential to inspire many more poems

Wonderful funny cute one.

I am the past that couldn't last I am the present That I only sent I am the unknown future I am the yesterday, today and the tomorrow. I love this verses very much........they sound like pledge of soldiers in an artillery.

am the zero, and the infinite I am the dividend and the divider it is perfect poem and i liked it. it with very good message.. read mine it's me

Nice Poem Nikunj it turned out pretty good. When you set up a dichotomy within a line make sure you have the article that goes with each item. Example (I am the cat and the dog) not (I am the cat and dog) The first is the dichotomy and the second isn't. The first make a comparison where the second become one thing with two parts conjoined. Here is my poem on the I am Popeye Is For Popeye Popeye is liking your spinach and eating the can too Popeye is always 100% sincere Popeye is a chuckle from a cheerful heart Popeye is determined to find out what’s wrong Popeye is a corncob pipe like a blowtorch a can-opener or a high speed vacuum pump Popeye is stepping out on the town and falling face down in the street Popeye is laughing about pie in your face yuckity yuck yuck yuck Popeye is always getting up and coming back for more Popeye is being stronger and wiser Popeye is the magical imagination supreme Popeye is strange lands with strange resolutions Popeye is a periscope in a sailor suit Popeye is always doing everything for who and what he loves Popeye is knowing a jeep is partially invisible Popeye is loving Olive-Oil no mater what Popeye is finishing at the top of the mountain Popeye is always “I am’s what's I am’s” R. H. Peat — 11/14/97 — 10: 13 PM From a letter to Stephen Sadler

am not perfect but i was perfectly made i am a wild voice but tamed by a loving heart i am naughty but my naughtiness brings joy to everybody's heart i am me..i am who i am..

Nikunj, this is a highly inspired write. i am because i breathe i am because i think i am becuase i feel i am... life, alive and living. beautiful indeed. goes to my fav.

Great! ! cryptic facts captured beautifully! 10++

a spiritual journey of self realization is on...

'I am the flow, word, music and the meter I am simile and the metaphor I am the moment and the spur The poem is reflection of me' Hey Nik, I feel therefore I am! ! ! .... I like it very much, simple but thoghtful. 13th August, London Rehana

Food for thought...nicely done.

Great poem, its true in a way, great write 10+

nice poem! ! ! nice contradiction too! ! ! ! I like it! ! ! 10/10

Very well crafted and needless to say it's very unique.

am the zero, and infinite I am the sum and divide I am...... Your belief Beautiful, The Gita summed up. CP

The GITA has been re-created for benefit of those who are not familiar! Thanks! -Raj Nandy

Strong ending! Well thought out. You are everything and then you give the honor to someone else. Intense but simple. You have created a tale for the reader, because of the reader. Complicated and at the same time, very easy. Truly a peice of work. Nice job. DC

Ok....Here you startled me...yet liked it...10+

well, this is nice..our belief plays an important role in our life..your poem is nicely done dearest niks..