I Am Comments

Highly philosophical. 'Who am I' was the philosophy propegated by a great sage by name Ramana Maharshi. India. When we put this question against every desire and craving; He said; our path would be clean of sins. Very good poem Min.10++++++

touching and beautiful poem.. great work..

lovely last lines..iam the start..iam the finish..iam is small and scary at start...iam is whole and joyful at the finish....10..read my 'the absolute world'

A wonderfully well expreddes, heart felt poem. u get 10++.......

Simply a description conveying the messege of peace has been put in polite words with some real soothing effect......10/10

Isa nanamang napakagandang tula...I wonder where you get those emotions and reveal it in a very poignant manner..very moving..for me this one is a 10!

heart touching write...telling an eye opening truth in the end...yes...peace is in prison...not only yours, Min... of the whole world...good poem...i liked...10

Life is a roller coaster ride but we have to take all difficulties in our stride..................... Good work.................

it's great to have you back.. well, it's a strong verse for me, with a lil' twist in the end.. i hope you get well soon from the havoc, Min Sia..

it's great to have you back.. well, it's a strong verse for me, with a lil' twist in the end.. i hope you get well soon from the havoc, Min Sia..

Great strong write my friend. Penned with rich imageries and self reflection, given...10/10

Welcome back, Min. A dark place this is written from I suspect. Your execution was well done and your message conveyed clearly.

You re all but peace...when everythin is in piece.Good writes Min.Take care.

Very beautiful write Min.........You have put some real good ingridients of melancholy in the poem with simple and sound words which offcourse makes it worth reading.........you have tried to spread the truth of peace with the help of really eloquent imageries.....This poem is a reall insignia of calmness.........10/10

dark imageries as if baptized by the fire of timeless truth, peace begets in your poem like a powerful serenading coda.

superb write min...............loved your work......very very powerful............

Well written piece Min Sia, good flow and content, 10 Lynda xx

well versed about self contemplation..great write...10