Monday, December 15, 2008

I Am Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a road incomplete
A dream being dreampt
A leaf from a busy tree
A note from a high pitched vioce
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Hannah Blair
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Emily Oldham 20 December 2008

Beautiful... I often feel like this too. Keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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indeed very unique, a very captivating theme with a broad view of descriptive imagery lovely write 10 :)

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Samantha Guinen 15 December 2008

This one reminds me of me and how i feel the world around me. This is a very nice poem. Edgar Allan Poe would have enjoyed reading this. Well done give yourself a hand

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 15 December 2008

Amazing! I'm very impressed with this piece Word choice was amazing, easy 2 understand, unique....I like it! Scale 1-10....13! It waz well worth the read!

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