I am the stream, I am the rivulet
I am the river flowing to the east or the west, south or north
I am the sea, I am the ocean
I am the delightful union of the river and the ocean;
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As a poem yes! But as a statement of philosophy or actuality, the great Unknown, Time, deletes it. A poet is like the rooster, the glory of the barnyard.- this poet is serenading his and our sense of beauty through self-awareness - and doing a good job - while sensibly ignoring what is totally beyond our ken: Time.
Superb sojourn of I’m. I’m All. It’s a Vedantic thought. Enjoyed. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite to read, comment Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems niv
a wonderful description, meaningful too. well penned! you're deep! thanks for sharing.
A nice poem - deep and elaborate, still leaving lots unsaid, to be felt / experienced as the state being portrayed is much beyond words.... Regards, Vanita.
Amazing, wonderful love it Keep it up. Well writen All the best Pamela
wonderful discovery of thyself! your profound verses prompts to conclude that 'i am the indestructible, eternal, ever pure, immaculate, holy, sacred soul! ! ! '
Wonderful hyperbolic poem, very well written..............10
All the efforts to annihilate me Will be consumed by the flames of My fiery nature.............so nicely worded poem to be remembered all the time....10 read mine what happens if... what is common
Yes! I am Poet as I am leader, teacher and everything in one! Very nice to read!
Varanasi, enjoyed your poem with a passion. Well written.10/10 Regards, Ian
A power packed monologue.