Monday, August 24, 2009

I Am Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am the stream, I am the rivulet
I am the river flowing to the east or the west, south or north
I am the sea, I am the ocean
I am the delightful union of the river and the ocean;
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Varanasi Ramabrahmam
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Anuradha Bhattacharyya 17 January 2015

A power packed monologue.

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warner treuter 04 May 2010

As a poem yes! But as a statement of philosophy or actuality, the great Unknown, Time, deletes it. A poet is like the rooster, the glory of the barnyard.- this poet is serenading his and our sense of beauty through self-awareness - and doing a good job - while sensibly ignoring what is totally beyond our ken: Time.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 October 2009

Superb sojourn of I’m. I’m All. It’s a Vedantic thought. Enjoyed. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite to read, comment Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems niv

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 06 September 2009

a wonderful description, meaningful too. well penned! you're deep! thanks for sharing.

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Vanita Thakkar 31 August 2009

A nice poem - deep and elaborate, still leaving lots unsaid, to be felt / experienced as the state being portrayed is much beyond words.... Regards, Vanita.

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Kristi . 30 August 2009

wow, very meaningful message. Wonderfully written,10 :)

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Bele Lele 29 August 2009

Amazing, wonderful love it Keep it up. Well writen All the best Pamela

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Vinod Ak 29 August 2009

wonderful discovery of thyself! your profound verses prompts to conclude that 'i am the indestructible, eternal, ever pure, immaculate, holy, sacred soul! ! ! '

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Marieta Maglas 28 August 2009

Wonderful hyperbolic poem, very well written..............10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2009

All the efforts to annihilate me Will be consumed by the flames of My fiery nature.............so nicely worded poem to be remembered all the time....10 read mine what happens if... what is common

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Rakesh Bedi 24 August 2009

Thanks for sharing such a deep thought, sir........regards!

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Ramesh T A 24 August 2009

Yes! I am Poet as I am leader, teacher and everything in one! Very nice to read!

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Ian Bowen 24 August 2009

Varanasi, enjoyed your poem with a passion. Well written.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Mamta Agarwal 24 August 2009

brilliant poem, with a great message Regards Mamta

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam

Varanasi Ramabrahmam

Vegeswarapuram, India
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