I Am Comments

Hi Tanvi, Fantastic poem. I could easily relate to your dreams. I find a young- forever young, young at heart-, dreaming, starry eyed girl, always exuberant and happy, in the poem. And yes, a very sturdy, strong person who does not get scared by the possibility of falling down, erring.. Tanvi, we fall, only when when we get up and start walking. But do not hesitate to get up and walk, no run, to your cherished destination. This is something every human being should do. Because, this is what every animal, plant do in the nature around you. Strongly reminding me of 'Jonathan Livingstone Seagull. All the best.

Hey Tanvi Its been ages, How you doing, I have a lot of catching up to do reading your wonderful poetry..you haven't lost it sweetie you are marvellous never stop writing :)

A great poem is this one, i give a ten.... i like the rhyme in it

very gôod poem...jst be what u r.

Yes indeed...you're everything. And after reading this i didn't felt like you were not in touch with poems for a long time like you said to me. It's really a beautiful one..you just weaved a wonderful poem here...Questions sor which we all seek answers. Take care.

Powerful statements in verse..Great insight.....a fine piece of poetry...10+++

loved it! good display of the contradictions of our life!

The poem shows the dreams which are always at a conflict and hence it's inspiring.nice work.!

I think it was cool. It's also true about every girl, although they may not know it. I like how you speak about reality in this poem.

very sweet write.you seem to be the girl who is out to achieve great things.best wishes.loved it.

Sweet, you've beautifully and fascinatingly depicted the heart of so many yet so very enticingly in the symbolism of just a girl on the terrace alone gazing into the starry sky thinking, dreaming, being so very real and natural. Delightful. I quite enjoyed it.

YOU ARE You are the girl look ordinary but expressing extraordinary feelings You are the girl took innocent and know what u want, tell everything You are the girl who never less than a light to shine in life ring Good luck to be real in ur dream, becoz u are the girl who will always young if u believe...innocent is ur skin

I am a girl who wants to be young forever

Absolutely you are then just like a Homosapiens. Not a degree more or less. Thank you. Run fast to hit the target from which point you can fall down easily. 10

Yes you are, everything thing that you said, that is who you are.and that is the power of reality.

Rich in realism about the important choices and experiences of life. Well done my friend.... We all have choices to make. Let's make the best choices and have the best lives...

You are indeed everything! Don't lose confidence and go ahead in life!

i loved your poem. i relate to it in so many ways. it really seems you are fit to be an amazing writer. keep writing.

It's pretty good. I like the idea of find out who you are :) That's a great topic for a poem!

you have done writing it well....a nice poem...GOD BLESS YOU...AND MORE POEM TO BE MADE.