I Am Comments

once again i really feel what you are saying. is this how every teen feels? i don't know what has happened in your past but it does shape who you are. (i had to learn that the hard way)

I like ur poem it's really good ur a great poet I so know how u feel it's the same for me and a lot of people. Its like I am never there I love the poem it has a lot of feelings in it.

Crystal.....this tears me apart. I challenge you to write a poem mirroring this........with all the positives about you. (Yes, there are positives!) I'll start for you... I am a caring person. I am a beautiful soul. I have a talent for writing words that reach others with a tenderness that others only dream of. I am important. I will reach my dream of happiness. I am better than you think. I will survive. I will succeed! I'll look forward to reading your poem! Send me a note when you post it. (Yes, I'm counting on you doing it) :) Take care Crystal. Sincerely, Mary

Well you sure are a good writer who just wrote a great poem. Don't be so down upon the negatives...the only way to erase the negatives is to think of the positives and if there are not too many positives well then it is up to you to create them. Take Harry Potter for instance, he had a life full of sadness and then went to Hogwarts to create a life of happiness. When he got home he hated it even more, but atleast he found something to look forward to.