Saturday, December 11, 2004

I Am Comments

Rating: 5.0

...and when I give I give with wild abandon,
no holds are barred, no watchers are considered.
I lay my head down on the tracks for you my love,
and if you want me all you need to do is take me.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Jayne Heming 16 December 2004

This is my favourite so far. Sometimes when you read a poem you take away the memory of a line or a phrase. My head is full of lines that have touched me in some way over the years and I have just added 'I cannot jump my silly god-forsaken shadow' to the collection. Best Jayne

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Kelly Allen Vinal 12 December 2004

Powerful verse, delivered in A+ style.

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Allan James Saywell 12 December 2004

You let her know what you want, then you grab it by the balls, the only language they know, i can see your a man for the jungle, do you want a loan of my trusty club it's a bit rusty WARM REGARD'S allan

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Sandra Osborne 11 December 2004

I really liked this. Heartfelt & True. Excellent 10+

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