I Am # 05 Comments

Birth is from fusion. So true

this grand write enacts a great struggle: to learn from the deepest wellspring of love, not from division.

My favourite stanza--'From the unknown time I learn everything in divided law, on the tone of faithfulness and unfaithfulness, in the verse of belief and disbelief, that taught me from predecessors learning Because I'm human of following being only! '

Birth is from unison, not from division.Through walks of life we see division and division.This is a poem of great depth.Thank you Mahatab Bangalee for sharing your insight.

A Very Happy New Year To You dear poet

A great grand write...said all are truth only, , , amazingly very knowledgeable, , , one of the best poems

Birth is not from sin Birth is from the best love; from the faithful love of two biological soul; From the gushing liquid I'm; as if an aquatic animal, nice poetry lines ❣️❣️❣️🙏💪👍❣️

Though born from love is not taught to contain the true sense of love, that is the only lapse of human beings

great and greatest universal appealing poem and thought shared; god bless you O poem Bangalee

so we have to learn and know ourselves perfectly- great thought

Everyone wanna know everything and learn evertything, but do not want to know and learn thyself~ great and thought provoking also

full of philosophy and universal thoughts on the base of humanism ~ I appreciate

wow great thought provoking poem you've every shared; great poetic genre you carry in your poetic mind

I love this poem. It really goes deep into learning and being. I feel sometimes that we lose a bit contact with the supreme creative Intelligence because we want to learn so much from our ancestors who lived in different times. I sometimes long to see the world with unlearned eyes, to discover the truths firsthand, like our famous ancestors were experiencing...

Birth is from two biology humans. Thanks for me understand the miracle of birth. I invite you to read mine alienation

Birth is from two biology humans. Thanks for me understand the miracle of birth.

Lovely poem. We live in a world of division. Duality is built in our nature but so is unity. Seeking and living in that Unity is what harmony of love brings.

Yes humans lost their humanity and are often divided by religion. More than that it's pity that we have forgotten the basic credentials that make us humane. Well expressed poem thank for sharing the poem with us...

Birth is not from sin but from ecstatic harmony of love between two bio.souls. Man is a being to follow the predecessors and so they teach not the greatest truth. Mahtab Bangalee Sir, really your philosophical bent of mind is great. Only such a mind can find substance for a poem on this topic. If your ideas have been given in 20 lines or around, it would have made a great impact in the minds of the young readers. Best wishes. Thanks for the comments made on my poem.

Philosophical, deep and inspiring! Very beautifully penned.