Sunday, March 11, 2018

I Am # 04 Comments

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As the essence of water
I am flowing over the entire world
I've power of over flowing
Absorbs me the sand;
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Edward Kofi Louis 09 July 2020

Cold harbour of love! ! ! ! Overflowing at times with your muse; As the writer writes along. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 August 2018

it's difficult to make poetic the thoughts that are philosophic, but the moon (Mahtab) is capable of changing sunlight into moonlight.

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Britte Ninad 08 August 2018

powerful strong philosophical writing on inner self - O failure' the dark said- ‘There is no dark I am the essence of your entity from the beginning You are raw existence of the genesis Open you inner eyesight; look there is no dark, What you do not see that is for your absent of inner eyesight! ‘

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Rajnish Manga 11 March 2018

There is no dark I am the essence of your entity from the beginning... A very sublime philosophical poem indeed.

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