Monday, January 15, 2018

I Am # 02 Comments

Rating: 4.9

No; I am none,
not a love,
not lover or beloved I am
not an anger in separation,
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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and I am entangled war of myself from birth of civilization of the capitalist! . Simply superb...10

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Harindhar Reddy 05 May 2020

A nice thought provoking poem. Yes it seems you brought whole nature in you. Stellar expression of words. A many made of multitude things of which brought some of them to the surface dear Mahtab Bangalee! 💯/💯👌👌

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Jolly Bill 23 September 2018

Fantastic expression of yourself- its actually by all you expressed yourself

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Ink of Sin 23 September 2018

Yes You're like me absolute ink of SIN

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GoG SHoP 23 September 2018

no, no, no, I'm none, I'm nothing now, I'm right drunkard!

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 August 2018

From the clot i am! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Britte Ninad 08 August 2018

this writing is on strongly discovering of self truly powerful writing

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 June 2018

A powerful write that goes to the core of being human. A thought provoking poem. Beautifully crafted.10

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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2018

Nothingness is all pervasive; we are in it.

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mahtab bangalee 14 May 2018

Dear Poet Khairul thanks for reading this poem and maxim comment

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Akhtar Jawad 11 May 2018

We have so many contrasts within us, it's difficult for man to understand himself. A great poem.

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