Friday, February 19, 2010

I Agree... Comments

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I agree with those who say that love comes in many ways.
They are right i wouldn't fight.
I am a victom of this, in love with someone who is not in mi sight,
far, but close at the sametime.
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Gwendalynn Ash 27 February 2010

Really good poem.I feel like that all the time.Keep on writing. ~Gwendalynn (Oh and just something that stood out to me is that you wrote 'victome'. I belive it is spelt 'Victim'.)

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good job keep up the good work

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Jake Shelvey 21 February 2010

I agree... Lol really good poem

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