Saturday, July 11, 2009

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C. P. Sharma
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 04 April 2010

A very deep poem…with originality…not a rapid-fire-reading-poem…for me…Sir 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Ruth Walters 19 August 2009

haha I loved this little poem and it's so true......... copying others often singes your tail feathers heheh.... Ruthy

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Sadiqullah Khan 23 July 2009

'In the fire pan I fry' true, the quest for I.

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rago rago 23 July 2009

thought provoking expressions..............

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Nikunj Sharma 22 July 2009

between the frying pan and the fire nothing I could see except me

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Mamta Agarwal 21 July 2009

who am I - eternal quest of man. once we realise we are unique, and part of a bigger plan, life begins to flow, there is no resistance. makes me ponder over life Mamta

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Brishti Mazumdar 16 July 2009

Yes sir...that's the question....Excellent thought again...10++

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To realize we are all part of the whole of creation, there is no need to copy another as we are all unique in our differences and to copy another would only be a mockery of ourself. It has made me think and this in itself makes it a good poem. 10 Karin Anderson

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Obed Souza 15 July 2009

A hard question... The search for myself ends up in the knowledge of God... I wouldn´t find myself if not looking for God. Nice poem!

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Onelia Avelar 15 July 2009

You put a fundamental question here :) To find yourself ist a long process and often goes through imitation in the beginning. Think about the growing kids. Fortunately not all the copy rights are reserved ;) - otherwise the frying in the fire-pan would start with our birth ;)

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Alison Cassidy 13 July 2009

A neat little poem with a sizzling message to all plagiarists. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Luwi Habte 12 July 2009

so very short written with vivid idea well done poet i like the peace Luwi

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Ejaz Khan 12 July 2009

Yes, originality is the best thing, a good realisation and a beautiful write!

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Vaibhav Pandey 12 July 2009

excellent point sir....full of wisdom...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 July 2009

Wow, excellent imagination,10.

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Rakesh Bedi 12 July 2009

Very well carved, sir; in the attempt to be someone one loses ones self and fails to be that someone, too!

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Catrina Heart 11 July 2009

Interesting thought expressed well...well life is a lifetime discovery, have to dig first to explore the world and from there we will know what we are and who we are....Lovely in few words! ! !

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trying to be someone else is not very natural....truth in a capsule

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

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