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i like this one as well! You are never alone though! Sometimes it seems that way, but you aren't. i am enjoying reading your poems!

smooth lines...... Alone as I wake, moving in the new place.. i like this like very much

well, I get a positive vibe from the first stanza and a looming pessimism in the 2nd one so here's my take on the poem: life is short, like the piece itself, unclear and though full of opportunity at first, one often gets lonely on their path in life.

its a bit too short but its really good and i like it ;) xx

This is different, but different is a good thing.....make your work stand my friend

hmmm interestin write