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the depth of 'I'... gud 1..10

superb write in its meaningfulness and simplicity....10!

I am a simple fragment, Of a forgotten thought, gr8 tht.....10+

A very humble piece. U get 10++++

Very good piece. Very poetic.

I am a simple fragment, Of a forgotten thought, - What a great line. You have a style all your own and I really enjoy your works.

another beautiful write mr.sarvesh, while reading your poem I remembered one I wrote ' Far Away '....thanks

The birth of an entity before its finality is the largest conscious effort towards the success of recognition that belies it eventfully. Love your poems, very dear to the heart.......I enjoy your work, arya

Nice poem with a confusing conclusion, still that it is a beautiful piece. I love it and added 10.