Sunday, January 14, 2007

(i) 6 (Angst) Dying Every Second Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dead are talking
The dead are walking
They are seeing yet not seeing
They gaze at you but dont see the quiver in your lips
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Geoff Warden 21 January 2007

T.O. Your writes never siece to amaze me, , , , , from the wordage right through to the message, , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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Ernestine Northover 14 January 2007

Now this one is excellent TO, a great write and a real pleasure to read. Loved the ending. Superb. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Preeti - is here! 14 January 2007

Amassing wealth, depleting our souls ^^ Great line. Superb poem! It's different from your other works! I like re-inventions! Preets

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