Saturday, December 16, 2006

(i) 4 (Angst) Here In This City Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here in this city
where dust drifts
Settles on you pretty
much so swift
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Catastrophe King 17 December 2006

That was an illusion in your pretty eye Where you saw some dust, as you fly! You are the gifted cloud, yet you cry For that same heart that’s no more my! Hey! The deathlike scab is an illusion. Just write and don’t bother this confusion! You are an angel cloud, you must wander Rain those limericks and don’t surrender!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 December 2006

A profoundly imaging concept here, T.O.....Your keen sense for innovation, is always a pleasure to the Readers Eyes & Mind..'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.

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