Sunday, December 29, 2019

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Rating: 5.0

I miss you more than u know my dear friend
I remember you more than any body care to know;
I am mad at you more than you ever know for leaving.
I also know your father and mother miss you more than
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Kingsley Egbukole 29 December 2019

A very touchy and sad poem of loss. Beautifully written...10.

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A B Faniki 30 December 2019

Thank you for the awesome rating. This piece just came to me after the loss of a friend I just felt so many things and question God. That There where man I.: -)

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Kim Barney 29 December 2019

Loss of a friend or family member is always hard, and sometimes hard to understand. Still, we must carry on and live our own lives as best we can. Interesting that you should mention Methuselah. That is the title of the last poem I posted, not written by me by by " Author Unknown" .

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A B Faniki 29 December 2019

Yep it is. It becomes hard and it seems their is no getting use to death. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a comment ur a hoot. As for the Methuselah thing there us a saying " there is no coincidence with the gods" so I guess it is meant for u figure it oyt. Lol

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A B Faniki 29 December 2019

Thanks for reading the poem and for ur wonderful rating and comment it made my day.

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Soran M. H 29 December 2019

a lot of I here make sense and enable us to understand your amazing message here +10

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