Where was I?
I rose from null
And one day
Vanish into void
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I rose from null And one day Vanish into void For a short period I play.... Amazing beginning. A beautiful philosophical poem well executed. Five stars.
Made a revisit today. Just enjoyed reading it once again, after nearly six years.
A wittingly expressed tale in fine words. Loved reading this lovely short piece.
Ma'am this is really beautiful. Our choice of words define me. And this defined me remains throughout even after we are gone. So we need to be wise in our choices.
I pluck my words From the trees There are millions and millions I choose a few only To write here And put my sign Wonderful imagination and presentation dear Bharati
A good poem to remember Bharati Nayak....10
For a short period I play On this stage. I pluck my words From the trees There are millions and millions I choose a few only....this is a truth that you write dear poetess Bharati....... after our death all these wonderful poems of yours will remain...... so many will read it and comment on it.... most of all they will be inspired to do good......... is it not a great thing...... you influence the generations to come......... tony.
Thank you so much Dr. tony Brahmin for such an inspiring comment on my poem.I feel so humbled. I am grateful to all readers and friends here who love to read my poems and encourage me to write.
I- probably the shortest possible name of a poem... Very nicely written. I liked the way you penned. With best wishes.
Where was I? I rose from null And one day Vanish into void For a short period I play On this stage........perfect words depicting life. Nice poem.
Thank you Dr Dillip Kumar Swain, Ranjan Kumar Ghosh, Edward Kofi Louis and Pravat Kumar Sahoo for your valuable opinion on my poem.
I choose a few only To write here And put my sign Because when they will come this poem is amazing thanks poet10++++++(+(! ! ! !
I find here a very natural expression of a poetic soul….“I play on this stage/I pluck my words from the trees/There are millions and millions/I choose a few only to write here”. A fabulous piece of poetry! Wish you and your family happy and prosperous new year 2018
Because when they will come this line is so nice 10++++++++++++
I choose a few only! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I have no words to express my appreciation for this amazing poem where I of the poet dwells in her words. Thank you so much, Bharati ji. I pluck my words / From the trees / There are millions and millions I choose a few only / To write here I am and will always be / In my presence and absence
My hearty thanks for your appreciative words.A poet dwells in his creations.As a poet and critic you are really an inspiration for others.
Understanding I is eternal and immortality of our words here will be maintained. Nice. .
a wonderful poem of one's worded essence for all to read now and forever? ..............well written.
Thank you Tom Allport for your kind comment.Such positive feedback of readers encourages a writer to keep writing.
This is giant sized! It makes me feel I am listening to words spoken on a Shakespearean stage straight from the bard himself... except they are Bharati's words and they spill from our hearts like smooth diamonds and pearls. Where was I? I rose from null And one day Vanish into void For a short period I play On this stage.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Perfect, Bharati as are the lines that follow. Putting this on my fav list so I will reread it often- -it is a jewel of the first water. 10 billion stars on this one! .
Your comments are always valuable jewels for me.Thank you Susan Williams for reading and commenting on my poems.
Lives recorded in a book…sometimes we write, sometimes others write about us; always God records.