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Her breast was warm and tender was her face
Secure was I within her long embrace
Protected from the pain of human care
It seemed that I was ever part of her
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Val, I was very captivated by this poem, in deaths grip Thanks
This one gave me goose-bumps Val. The last verse is just sublime.
Excellent Poem....imaginatively crafted I find Indian Vedantic thought here...have you read Vedanta? It is evil-spirit dwells in us needs sanitization by rigorous religious psychic exercise flushing impurities Its great poem of Wisdom...tenner ~ Regards ~ niv ====== Thanks for comment on my poem Invite to read and comment on my poem [read as a protest] ‘Omini Pervading Mother' or any … Thanks …..Sorry for belated comment
This is so filled with emotion, it seems one tore from a mothers loving and warm embrace... Terribly sad. Thank you Karen :)
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8/3/2025 10:10:35 PM # 1.0.0
Superb poem, deep and making the reader reflect. Keep writing, Val. You have soooo much talent!