I am a soul
Your life force
I am the driver
Really just a pinpoint of life
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Awsome poem....👌👌👌👌👌✌✌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌
Abhimanyu Kumar..... you know it like i do- the measure of your creation
I reviewed and it disappeared.. I said wonderful perception and imagism... I felt immediatly calmed after reading this... tyvm top marks..Karen
Beautiful perception and imaging...I felt at peace as I read this...Ty Karen
to exist in flow- I can see it! Thought provoking poem abhimanyu
A very interesting viewpoint on the soul of man, please read my `Genes` and give me your` valued comments. Thank You.
I love this poem, outpouring in pureness and humility. The senses have overpassed the understanding of one'self. This poem incites our awareness that even we are so tiny in this big wide world, each of us is part of the endless constillations. A positive poem for a changing world like ours. Thanks for sharing and in winging us in your world!
Dear friend, Being a meta soul beyond the comprehension of intellect and imagination. you are a mystic gone deep into that world seeking communion with the Eternal. This kind of poem everyone can not write. Those who are bereft of ambition, affection, animosity, amoral sense.. alone can plunge into this distant world. A well written poem.Your meditation has transported you to a higher level to see His world. Cheers for pouring lines of the metaphysical world.
It must help you to have a picture in your mind of the soul. I quite like the idea of the soul on a throne between your brows. I like that because it seems an original idea, while concepts like the meta soul slip past me, perhaps because it or they are borrowed from one or other religion. No?
Powerful prospective!