Wednesday, July 20, 2011

' I ' Comments

Rating: 3.3

I am a soul
Your life force
I am the driver
Really just a pinpoint of life
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abhimanyu kumar.s
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Powerful prospective!

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ruchita vaishnav 29 December 2017

Wonderful poems..

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Harishkumarns 15 December 2017

Super sir.....

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Kunal vaishnav 15 December 2017

Awsome poem....👌👌👌👌👌✌✌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌

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Bhagya 14 December 2017

Superb sir....

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Arvind 14 December 2017

sir awesome

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Beautiful poem indeed

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Wahab Abdul 30 June 2012

very good one, i like it

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Corrina Kavea 25 June 2012

Abhimanyu Kumar..... you know it like i do- the measure of your creation

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Karen Sinclair 15 June 2012

I reviewed and it disappeared.. I said wonderful perception and imagism... I felt immediatly calmed after reading this... tyvm top marks..Karen

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Karen Sinclair 15 June 2012

Beautiful perception and imaging...I felt at peace as I read this...Ty Karen

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Anita Sehgal 04 June 2012

The true I. well said!

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Kealeboga Malejane 16 March 2012

The true essence of word expression, very nice! !

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William Jackson 16 March 2012

to exist in flow- I can see it! Thought provoking poem abhimanyu

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Kara Towe 15 January 2012

Good but what is a meta soul?

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George Bernard Hough 14 January 2012

A very interesting viewpoint on the soul of man, please read my `Genes` and give me your` valued comments. Thank You.

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Virginia Pecho Gely 14 January 2012

I love this poem, outpouring in pureness and humility. The senses have overpassed the understanding of one'self. This poem incites our awareness that even we are so tiny in this big wide world, each of us is part of the endless constillations. A positive poem for a changing world like ours. Thanks for sharing and in winging us in your world!

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Rajendran Muthiah 14 January 2012

Dear friend, Being a meta soul beyond the comprehension of intellect and imagination. you are a mystic gone deep into that world seeking communion with the Eternal. This kind of poem everyone can not write. Those who are bereft of ambition, affection, animosity, amoral sense.. alone can plunge into this distant world. A well written poem.Your meditation has transported you to a higher level to see His world. Cheers for pouring lines of the metaphysical world.

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Kevin East 14 January 2012

Nice. Spiritual and easy on the ear. Well done.

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John Raubenheimer 13 January 2012

It must help you to have a picture in your mind of the soul. I quite like the idea of the soul on a throne between your brows. I like that because it seems an original idea, while concepts like the meta soul slip past me, perhaps because it or they are borrowed from one or other religion. No?

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