Sunday, March 22, 2015

Hysteria Comments

Rating: 5.0

The hearts crawling on each other,
Were satisfied and content,
But time was jealous and could not see,
The two innocents in love only love.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bisma Mirza 23 March 2015

One of the Best poem I have ever seen.... Beautiful 10 on 10....,

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Valsa George 23 March 2015

In a short span of just one year, it is so laudable that you could compose over 400 beautiful poems on a variety of subjects! Let the ensuing years show even a bigger output! Wish you all the best! A great write on a relationship that was on the brink of collapse, but was saved at the right time!

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Hazel Durham 23 March 2015

Time marches on relentlessly we have to make sure we keep moving forward in a positive way to get the most out of life! Beautifully written with as always your great creativity painting stunning images! Congrats on your 1st year in PH!

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Jaishree Nair 22 March 2015

What an emotional outpour.it is the curse of the advancement of time.we have to overcome all and move with destiny. We are a family here in PH.Never feel alone. Thanks for sharing

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Mantu Mahakul 22 March 2015

And to go back, In her lovely arms, For an unending sleep, And the dreams unseen...' Wonderful drafting really shared here with touching words. Wonderful imagery.

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Kelly Kurt 22 March 2015

A touching poem. Thank you for sharing. Happy 1st year. You are not alone.

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