Will you cry for them
When they commit sin
The deadliest one
Taking their own life?
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I am so hoping this Pope cleans house. I am not a Catholic but he has won my respect- -now let's see how he does when every cardinal in the place will probably he against drastic reform... Your poem has righteous fire in its eyes, my friend, it should be used to scorch a bunch of cardinal feathers. Great poem. 10++++++++++++++++++++++
Susan, I too have great respect for this pope! He is like no other. If anyone can clean house, it's him. Your scorch line is a classic. Love it! Thank you so much for believing that the poem is great.
This is unforgivable, more so when the sinners belong to the revered Roman Catholic order. They have broken the trust of all followers of the faith. We can listen to the cries of those victimised. Thanks, Richard.
A very powerful write for the innocent victims of child abuse. Each stanza in this poem stands out. Very touching and moving lines. Brilliantly penned.10+++
Rose Marie, I am overwhelmed with your very positive feedback. Humbled and greatly flattered. Thank you so very much!
Andy, I get very emotional writing about this subject. Thank you for visiting and for your positive response.
Will you ask for forgiveness And be absolved of your sins By hypocritical oath Of the damned lost and found church........so touching with nice theme. Beautiful poem.10
Kumarmani, thank you so much for your continued support and encouragement!
Bernard, until the Roman Catholic Church starts to take some very serious action, I will continue writing about this subject!
A poem of truths? surely there is no forgiving evil! ..........well written Richard
In this case, the truth really hurts! Tom, thank you for believing it to be well written.