When I want you
to hold me,
you always pretend and
take my hand,
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lovely rational lyric poem.....touching....thank you for sharing............10+++
good job, you express your emotions so well in your poem. It is when you make people feel what your feeling that catches a persons attention. great job on this one.
My dear friend..love that famed and perplexing thing.You express what us many feel and still come up with no answers.
Its like this poem comes from the depths of your heart.Nice one.
Good write well expressed..............