Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Hypocrite Comments

Rating: 4.9

When I want you
to hold me,
you always pretend and
take my hand,
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Oluko George
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Eyan Desir 07 September 2009

Good write well expressed..............

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Marieta Maglas 03 September 2009

lovely rational lyric poem.....touching....thank you for sharing............10+++

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Demar Henry 21 March 2009

Intense....I can feel the emotions in this one.

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Lakshmi Venkataraman 20 March 2009

nice 1.... well expressed emotions! ! !

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Oscar Cantu 13 March 2009

good job, you express your emotions so well in your poem. It is when you make people feel what your feeling that catches a persons attention. great job on this one.

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 06 March 2009

My dear friend..love that famed and perplexing thing.You express what us many feel and still come up with no answers.

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Dream Catcher 06 March 2009

Its like this poem comes from the depths of your heart.Nice one.

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It is normal that you love her.

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Sally Plumb 03 March 2009

I lke this one too... regards from Sally

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Oluko George

Oluko George

Nairobi[Kenya]
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