Friday, March 20, 2015

Hypocrisy Comments

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We are breathing in a society,
Declining some more with the every new breath,
Hypocrisy that ruled the world even when angles came on the earth,
Is still rotating like electrons,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Luz Hanaii 10 September 2018

Last stanza is a good warning to those who think they've got it made on this earth. It reshuffles the universe, Including this earth, That is what I found in all Holy Books. TFS

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C N Prem Kumar 24 March 2015

Nice poem with something for the brain. congrats

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Hazel Durham 21 March 2015

It is a wonderful life to be just an ordinary person we can live with a peaceful mind to enjoy this world without any power we're free to be independent in spirit and mind! Powerful and beautiful write!

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Valsa George 21 March 2015

Being ordinary people with not enough money to wallow in comforts or not enough power to make others at our beck and call, we have some advantages! Definitely there is greater peace of mind and lesser problems! Power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely! You have stated a general truth quite convincingly!

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Amitava Sur 21 March 2015

A very powerful eye opener to all those hypocrites (irrespective of a doctor, police, lawyer, judge or a politician) . No doubt they are extracting under the mask of those disciplines, but can they really have a nice sleep or a peace of mind? They may eat, drink or enjoy but they all are with poisons! ! ! Thank you Akhtar vai.

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Bisma Mirza 20 March 2015

Amazing one... Really good 10 on 10...

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A powerful message and warning from a skilled bard, indeed...Enjoyed this, as your socratic depiction of the all too woeful state of our world is spot-on...as well as quite poetically eloquent ~FjR~

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Kelly Kurt 20 March 2015

You make many good points. Thank you for sharing

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Khalida Bano Ali 20 March 2015

A bitter truth, but who cares? ..........................10

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