Saturday, June 11, 2005

Hypochondriac Comments

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Maybe it’s Emphysema, a shiny black jewel of phlegm
humming like a clump of bees in my chest.
Perhaps a tumor crawling in the crook of my armpit,
a blood clot opening like a tiny red flower in my brain.
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Chris Tusa
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Con Nie 08 May 2006

I know someone who is a hypochondriac and your poem reminded me of them. Good description! Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Max Reif 09 July 2005

Extemely vivid images, bring the whole poem to life!

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Chris Tusa

Chris Tusa

New Orleans, Louisiana
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