Saturday, September 12, 2020
Hypnotizing My Eyes Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Standing on the beach,
sand between my toes,
many birds, circling,
flying by so low.
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Mahtab Bangalee
12 September 2020
A long orange streak, hanging, low in the sky, the setting of the sun, hypnotizing my eyes, ....well imaginative expression
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Deluke Muwanigwa
12 September 2020
Good poem. So its a picture. You were not at the beach. Very clever
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7/17/2025 11:21:23 PM # 1.0.0
A superb poem and so well written and of course imagined. And love your final stanza pay off. Many thanks good sir and a full score that is richly deserved. I wish you well and thanks again.