Friday, March 7, 2008

Hypnotized Comments

Rating: 5.0

Within the crowd, your blood points you out- a sharp edge about you.
Oh so intrigued by attention.
The span of your audience is wearing thin,
so give it a
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Melissa Hennessy
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Marieta Maglas 01 December 2009

When the emergency strikes you, you better not loose your nerve nice abstract poem

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Jerry Hughes 11 April 2008

I belive Frank said it all but I'll add one word - excellent!

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Commendable work, young lady....Graphic, and poignant depiction employed... Effulgent imagework...Creative use of simple, yet impactive lexicon.You possess natural largess for creative writing.Good Luck! ~ FjR ~

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