Within the crowd, your blood points you out- a sharp edge about you.
Oh so intrigued by attention.
The span of your audience is wearing thin,
so give it a
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Commendable work, young lady....Graphic, and poignant depiction employed... Effulgent imagework...Creative use of simple, yet impactive lexicon.You possess natural largess for creative writing.Good Luck! ~ FjR ~
When the emergency strikes you, you better not loose your nerve nice abstract poem