Monday, May 11, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

(Motivated by dreams and nightmares that have haunted me for years)

I wanted to learn who you really are,
I needed the chance to stitch up my scars,
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JeT Campe
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Alicia Phillips 13 May 2009

i think this is a fantastic poem

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Tailor Bell 11 May 2009

strong work, JeT, pulses with energy...takes one right up to the edge wondering. keep posting. -Tailor

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