October night rains
chattering in the trees,
the chill breeze
murmuring his prayers,
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So much depth and beauty! Stunning imagery and the ending is a surprise for the reader. A wonderful read! Nature and emotions are juxtaposed so artfully.
and then, love failed in October and the mournful moods reappear to reap the last sparks of joy, intense inner landscapes.5/5
Thank you Alyx. I am very happy that you could follow the poem and it's mood.
"the chill breeze" of October and the cold night rains signal a closing is near.