Tuesday, October 1, 2024

Hymns Of October Night Rains Comments

Rating: 5.0

October night rains
chattering in the trees,
the chill breeze
murmuring his prayers,
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Rob Lamberton 09 October 2024

"the chill breeze" of October and the cold night rains signal a closing is near.

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Nosheen Irfan 05 October 2024

So much depth and beauty! Stunning imagery and the ending is a surprise for the reader. A wonderful read! Nature and emotions are juxtaposed so artfully.

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Alyx True Edge 02 October 2024

and then, love failed in October and the mournful moods reappear to reap the last sparks of joy, intense inner landscapes.5/5

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Thank you Alyx. I am very happy that you could follow the poem and it's mood.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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