Thursday, September 25, 2008

Hymn To The Ocean Comments

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Hymn to the ocean


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Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel
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I like the last sentences which are strong 'Underworld’s population/ Enchanted temptations Mermaids whisper their / Love hymn to the ocean' The imagery is well planned and well penned. I enjoyed it dear Mencita. It deserves a 10-. Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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